Kia ora Sau, great to see you've started commenting on Day 1 of the Summer Learning Journey. Are you going to set a commenting goal? All comments that are positive, thoughtful or helpful will receive points. Remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form.
I’m glad you liked this task too, I think your friend will enjoy getting your comment and maybe you could show him your catapult too if you still have it.
Good Job one your comment on Tumanaako’s blog. It was short but you were positive and encouraging. This is great to help the person feel good about their work and know what they are already doing well.
But it’s also really important to go a bit deeper in that “Helpful” part a bit more too. Maybe suggesting they could also try something different or new to make their blog post even better.
When we do this in a kind, caring way it helps them learn and improve. It takes a bit of practice which I’m still learning to do as I’m commenting on your blogs too but it’s worth it to help others improve.
Kia ora Sau, great to see you've started commenting on Day 1 of the Summer Learning Journey. Are you going to set a commenting goal? All comments that are positive, thoughtful or helpful will receive points. Remember to submit a link to your published comment using this form.
ReplyDeleteMalo,
Mrs Grant
Kia ora Sau,
ReplyDeleteI’m glad you liked this task too, I think your friend will enjoy getting your comment and maybe you could show him your catapult too if you still have it.
Good Job one your comment on Tumanaako’s blog. It was short but you were positive and encouraging. This is great to help the person feel good about their work and know what they are already doing well.
But it’s also really important to go a bit deeper in that “Helpful” part a bit more too. Maybe suggesting they could also try something different or new to make their blog post even better.
When we do this in a kind, caring way it helps them learn and improve. It takes a bit of practice which I’m still learning to do as I’m commenting on your blogs too but it’s worth it to help others improve.
Great work Sau,
See you later in the comments.
Daniel
Hello Sau, That is a positive comment ! Keep up the enthusiastic comments :) I'm sure Tumanaako is lucky to have an encouraging friend like you.
ReplyDeleteKind Regards, Nita